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説明書の英文校正例
原文
Removing the side port (Perform this operation by two or more persons.)
(1) Turn off power to the loader and the circuit protectors of FFU No.1 and No.2.
(2) Take off the lower cover on the lower part of the side port.
(3) Remove the six M8 bolts that are fixing the side port. Be sure to hold the front handle to remove the bolts because the side port is likely to fall down forward. Do not loosen other bolts during removal.
(4) Pull the side port toward the operator and remove it from the loader while holding the front handle of the side port. When pulling the side port toward the operator, be careful not to catch the connection cables removed earlier and air tube under the side port.
英文校正
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Removing the side port (Perform tUsing perform here is too strong a direct command. The rephrasing gives a more appropriate style.This operation should be carried out by two or more personsople.)
(1) Turn off the power to the loader and the circuit protectors of FFUs No.1 and No.2.
(2) Take off Remove the lower cover on the lower part of the side port.
(3) Remove the six M8 bolts that areThe original that are fixing here was a little too wordy. Simply using securing is better. fixing securing the side port. Be sure to hold the front handle to when removeing the bolts because to prevent the side port is likely to from fallThe original translation here was not natural English. The rewrite improves the style greatly.ing down forward. Do not loosen other bolts during removal.
(4) While holding the handle, Ppull the side port toward the operator and remove it from the loader while holding the front handle of the side port. When pulling the side portThe translator's version had three uses of the side port close together. This rewrite avoids such unnecessary repetition. toward the operator, b Be careful not to catch the connection cables removed earlier and or the air tube under the side port.
英文校正後
Removing the side port (This operation should be carried out by two or more people.)
(1) Turn off the power to the loader and the circuit protectors of FFUs No.1 and No.2.
(2) Remove the cover on the lower part of the side port.
(3) Remove the six M8 bolts securing the side port. Be sure to hold the front handle when removing the bolts to prevent the side port from falling forward. Do not loosen other bolts during removal.
(4) While holding the handle, pull the side port toward the operator and remove it from the loader. Be careful not to catch the connection cables removed earlier or the air tube under the side port.
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