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9. Economic Growth of China and Influence on Japan
The rapid economical growth of China is, at the same time, both a menace for Japanese companies as well as a source of new business opportunities. For the materials industries represented by iron and steel products, in fact, the export from Japan increased as the GDP of China expanded. Further, Japan-made industrial machines are often used in China. In China where many of the infrastructures are not yet developed even in the service industries including physical distribution, the know-how accumulated in Japan will prove precious in order to develop industrial infrastructures.
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9. The Economic Growth of China and its Influence on Japan
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9. The Economic Growth of China and its Influence on Japan
For Japanese companies, the rapid economic growth of China represents both a threat and a potential source of new business. Exports from Japan in the iron and steel industries have in fact increased as the GDP of China has expanded, and industrial machines made in Japan are widely used in China.
As Chinese infrastructures are still underdeveloped (including the physical distribution of the service industries), expertise accumulated in Japan will prove valuable in the development of such structures.
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