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原文
Experiments made possible a higher cutting speed of 100% for exothermic burning metals in steels and about 400% for titaniums. A mathematical welding model of the combined energy only fitted the real results if the arc root was narrow to near the laser beam width and the arc entered the keyhole. It is possible that this is because of the easier conduction route down the laser-generated plasma and the magnetic arc pinch effect it makes on the arc.
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Experiments madeEnabled here feels much more natural than made possible. possible enabled an increased higher cutting speed , for metals that burn exothermically, of 100% for exothermic burning metals steels and about 400% for titaniums.
A mathematical welding model of the combined energy only fitted correspondedFitted doesn't seem appropriate here. Corresponded has a much better feeling. to the real observed results if the arc root was had narrowed to near the laser beam width and the arc entered the keyhole. It is possible that this is because of This mayThe re-wording here avoids the close repetition of is and makes the sentence more readable. be due to the easier conduction route down the laser-generated plasma and the subsequent magnetic pinch effect it makes on the arc.
英文校正後
Experiments enabled an increased cutting speed, for metals that burn exothermically, of 100% for steel and about 400% for titanium.
A mathematical welding model of the combined energy only corresponded to the observed results if the arc root had narrowed to near the laser beam width and the arc entered the keyhole. This may be due to the easier conduction route down the laser-generated plasma and the subsequent magnetic pinch effect on the arc.
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