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(1) Teaching and memorize - development of education
The education to improve IQ The original translation here was very Japanese English in style, requiring a complete rewrite for natural English. This is a good example of our Advanced Editing Service.started from 19 C. There were schools called "Terakoya" where they teach to read and write for ordinary children. There were different better schools for ruling classes. There also were private schools for people with money for teaching costs. But in all the schools the mainstream of the education was to teach and memorize. In the university, they translated the western country's studies and taught in Japanese, not developing ability to think to create new things.
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(1) Teaching and memorizeRote Learning - the"Rote learning" is the standard English term for the educational technique that focuses on simple memorization. See en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rote_learning.
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The nineteenth century saw the development of education methods designedThis felt like it was missing from the original. Its addition helps to clarify the meaning of the original. to improve IQ started from 19 CThis sounds more natural at the start of the sentence. Also, within a sentence, writing "19 C" as "nineteenth century" gives a better English style.. At that time in Japan, There were schools called known as "Terakoya"Quotation marks are often over-used in J/E translations. As this is not a quotation, no quotation marks are needed. where theyused to teach to reading and write writing for ordinary children, while those from the. There were different better schools forJoining these short sentences together helps to improve the readability of the English. ruling classes attended superior establishments. There also were pPrivate schools also existed for people with the money for teaching costsmeans to pay schooling feesRephrased for more natural English expression..
But However, It is considered poor style to start English sentences with "but".in all the schools the mainstream basic method of the education was to teach and memorizerote learning. In theAt university level, they translated thestudies fromAs the identity of "they" is not known here, it is better to use the passive voice. western country's countries studies were translated and taught in Japanese, not which did little to The original here had a rather Japanese English feeling - this rewrite is more how an English native speaker would express the idea.developing the ability to think to createively new things.
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(1) Rote Learning - the Development of Education
The nineteenth century saw the development of education methods designed to improve IQ. At that time in Japan, schools known as Terakoya used to teach reading and writing for ordinary children, while those from the ruling classes attended superior establishments. Private schools also existed for people with the means to pay schooling fees.
However, in all schools the basic method of education was rote learning. At university level, studies from western countries were translated and taught in Japanese, which did little to develop the ability to think creatively. It was necessary to create new educational techniques to combat this.
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