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医学の英文校正例
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Psychopharmological objective: Examining if induced lowering of levels of serotonin (5-HT) levels increases behavioral measures of impulsiveness. Twenty-four healthy young men took a mixture of essential amino acids for a balanced, random, double blind, placebo controlled crossover design. The continuous-performance test using identical pairs was administered when the concentration of plasma of an acid was thought to be at its lowest, and the concentrations of plasma of 23 amino acids were measured at baseline and 5 h after the ingestion of the mixture of amino acids.
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Psychopharmological objective: To examine whether the induced lowering of serotonin (5-HT) levels would increase behavioral measures of impulsivity.
Twenty-four healthy young males ingested a mixture of essential amino acids in a balanced, randomized, double-blind, placebo-controlled cross-over study. The continuous performance test using identical pairs was administered when the plasma concentration of a particular acid was expected to be at the lowest point. The plasma concentrations of 23 amino acids were measured at baseline and at 5 hours after the ingestion of the amino acid mixture.
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