英文校正の例 - インターネット・テクノロジー
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インターネット・テクノロジーの英文校正例
原文
The Internet is undergoing explosive growth as the mobile and broadband environments are being upgraded. The Internet access capability has been given to both personal computers and common electrical appliances such as television sets, beginning to significantly influence the life style of users. While the need is growing for advanced and convenient Internet services, it is becoming increasingly more difficult to find information that matches users' preferences from among an enormous number of services and contents.
英文校正
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The Internet Switching the first and second parts of this sentence around offers much better logic and style.is undergoing explosive growth as the As a result of the upgrading of mobile and broadband environments are being upgraded. The environments, the Internet is currently experiencing explosive growth. Internet access capability has been This is more natural as is now availablegiven to both is now available not only for personal computers and but also for common electrical appliances such as television sets - a trend which is beginning to significantly influence the life style of users. While the need is Putting is growing later in the sentence improves readability and style. growing for advanced and convenient Internet services, convenient advanced Internet services is growing, it is becoming increasingly moThe meaning of more is already included in increasingly, so this can be omitted.re difficult to find information that matches matching user preferences from among an the enormous number raNumber is generally used for countable nouns, while amount is used for non-countable. However, the subject nouns (services and content) are countable and non-countable respectively, so neither one is appropriate in this case. Range can be used for both, so is much better here. nge of services and contents available.
英文校正後
As a result of the development of mobile and broadband capabilities, the Internet is currently experiencing explosive growth. Internet access is now not limited to personal computers, but is also available for common electrical appliances such as television sets - a trend which is beginning to significantly influence the lifestyle of users.
While the need for convenient advanced Internet services is growing, it is becoming increasingly difficult to find information matching user preferences among the enormous range of services and content available.
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