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原文
COPs (cyclic olefin polymers and copolymers) are engineering thermal plastics for the modern era made from ring-shaped molecules of norbornene, made from dicyclopentadiene (DCPD) and ethylene. They have glassy transparency, low dielectric loss, low absorption of moisture, excellent dimentional stability, high heat resistance (212-374 F Tg), and high melt-flow rates which make possible very exact molding.
英文校正
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COPs (Cyclic olefin polymers (COPs) and copolymers) It is much clearer to give the full name followed by the abbreviation than vice-versa. are modern engineering thermaloplastics for the modern The rephrasing here makes the text more natural and clearer.era made derived from the ring-shaped norbornene molecules of norbornene, which is made from up of dicyclopentadiene (DCPD) and ethylene. They have These It was not clear whether the original they referred to the resins, the molecules or the chemicals. This rewrite avoids any ambiguity.resins boast glassy-like transparency, low dielectric loss, low absorption of moisture absorption, excellent dimentsional stability, high heat resistance (212-374 F Tg), and high melt-flow rates which make The change here gives much more natural English. possible that permit very exact precise molding.
英文校正後
Cyclic olefin polymers (COPs) and copolymers are modern engineering thermoplastics derived from the ring-shaped norbornene molecule, which is made up of dicyclopentadiene (DCPD) and ethylene. These resins boast glass-like transparency, low dielectric loss, low moisture absorption, excellent dimensional stability, high heat resistance (212-374F Tg), and high melt-flow rates that permit very precise molding.
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